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docs/pages/blog/2023-material-ui-v6-and-beyond.md

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 ### Material UI v7
 
-Material UI v7 is where you can expect to see the native support for [Material 3](https://m3.material.io/), Google's latest Material Design update, as well as many other design improvements across the component suite.
+Material UI v7 is where you can expect to see native support for [Material 3](https://m3.material.io/), Google's latest Material Design update, as well as many other design improvements across the component suite.
 It's tentatively planned for Q4 of 2024.
 
 <img alt="Side-to-side comparison of a Card component using Material Design 2 and 3, respectively." src="/static/blog/2023-material-ui-v6-and-beyond/m2-m3.jpg" width="1200" height="600" loading="lazy" />
 
-The development for this version is already in course, though!
+The development for this version is already in progress, though!
 See which components already support the Material 3 specs, through the experimental `@mui/material-next` package, by visiting the newly released [All Components page](/material-ui/all-components/).
 
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 ## From design to development
 
-In addition to the updates to the Reactly library, we've also been working on a long-requested Figma plug-in to help bridge the gap between designers and developers using Material UI.
-We're getting super close to a first release, and it is, for now, custom-tailored to work nicely along the [Material UI Design Kits](/material-ui/getting-started/design-resources/).
+In addition to the updates to the React library, we've also been working on a long-requested Figma plug-in to help bridge the gap between designers and developers using Material UI.
+We're getting super close to a first release, which is custom-tailored to work nicely with the [Material UI Design Kits](/material-ui/getting-started/design-resources/).
 
 <img alt="A screenshot of Figma together with the MUI Connect plug-in running on the side, doing customziations to the Material UI Switch component." src="/static/blog/2023-material-ui-v6-and-beyond/connect.jpg" width="1200" height="600" loading="lazy" />
 
 We're calling it MUI Connect, and it generates a theme file with all the customizations done on Figma.
-You'll be able to export it and paste it into your codebase and visualize it in a Storybook instance, too.
+You'll be able to export it and paste it into your codebase, as well as visualize it in a Storybook instance.
 Stay tuned for a beta version release early next year!
 
 ## A sharper focus